In this post I will be going over my ideas for a revised Iron Man movie and a revised Incredible Hulk movie.

Iron Man Revised:

Title: Iron Man: The Cost of Power
Main Villain: Obadiah Stane (Iron Monger)
Secondary Villains: The Ten Rings
Major Set-Up: The Mandarin as Tony's future archenemy
Post-Credits Scene: Nick Fury introduces the idea of mutants in the world

Plot Outline

The film follows the same basic structure as the original Iron Man (2008), but the character dynamics between Tony Stark and Obadiah Stane are more deeply developed to create a stronger thematic conflict. This version emphasizes a philosophical clash between Tony’s newfound morality and Obadiah’s unrelenting ambition and justification of the weapons business.

Act 1: Tony’s Fall and Realization

The film begins similarly, with Tony Stark, billionaire weapons manufacturer, living a hedonistic lifestyle and making billions from Stark Industries’ contracts with the U.S. military. He is a man who sees the world through the lens of profit and technological advancement, with little regard for the consequences.

After the demonstration of his Jericho missile in Afghanistan, Tony is kidnapped by the Ten Rings, a shadowy terrorist organization. They use Stark Industries weapons, which shocks Tony and makes him confront the ugly reality of his empire.

Tony’s time in the cave mirrors the original film, where he builds the Mark I armor with Yinsen. However, there’s a greater emphasis on Yinsen’s story, showing more of the devastation caused by Stark Industries weapons. Yinsen's words weigh heavily on Tony: "Sometimes, the greatest enemy isn't the man with the gun—it's the man who sold him the bullets."

Tony’s escape from the cave and return home triggers the beginning of his character transformation. He publicly announces that Stark Industries will no longer manufacture weapons, stunning the world and angering Obadiah Stane, his long-time business partner and surrogate father figure.

Act 2: Ideological Conflict with Obadiah

Back home, Tony starts working on refining the Iron Man armor with Jarvis, while battling both physical and emotional trauma from his experience. Meanwhile, Obadiah works in the background, increasingly agitated by Tony's change in philosophy. He sees Tony’s decision to stop producing weapons as not just a betrayal but also as foolish and naïve.

Obadiah’s character is fleshed out further. He’s not just greedy—he genuinely believes that Stark Industries' weapons maintain global stability. He views Tony as selfish for abandoning this responsibility after seeing just one instance of their misuse. Obadiah explains to Tony, "You can’t save the world by dismantling its only defense. You’ll doom it."

As Tony works on the arc reactor and Mark II suit, Obadiah begins secretly dealing with the Ten Rings, seeking to consolidate his power and restore Stark Industries to its former place as the top weapons manufacturer. The Ten Rings are revealed to be much more than a mere terrorist group—they are a well-funded organization with ties to the Mandarin, who remains an unseen, menacing force in the background, setting up for future films.

Tony and Obadiah’s confrontations grow more intense, with Obadiah emphasizing that Tony is being reckless and abandoning his duty as a global defender through advanced technology. Tony, however, begins to realize that true defense isn’t through weapons—it’s through responsibility and control of those weapons.

Act 3: The Iron Monger

Obadiah finally reveals his hand when he steals Tony’s arc reactor and reverse engineers the Iron Monger suit. He confronts Tony, explaining that while Tony "grew a conscience," the world doesn’t have that luxury. "It’s a brutal place, and if we don’t arm it, someone else will. You have to accept that reality."

The final showdown between Iron Man and Iron Monger plays out similarly to the original film, but with more emotional weight. Tony isn’t just fighting to stop a madman—he’s fighting to prove that he can create a better future, one without mass destruction, and where power is in the hands of the responsible. The battle is symbolic: two men who once saw the world the same way, now locked in a conflict of ideologies.

The Ten Rings, led by their regional commander, make an appearance during the climax, suggesting that their ultimate leader—the Mandarin—is observing these events from the shadows, testing Tony Stark. This hints at the future where the Mandarin will become a greater threat to Tony.

Resolution: Stark's Responsibility

After defeating Obadiah, Tony reaffirms his decision to distance Stark Industries from the arms trade, using his arc reactor technology to power the world, not destroy it. He publicly reveals himself as Iron Man in the now-iconic press conference.

Post-Credits Scene: Mutants Introduced

As in the original Iron Man, Nick Fury visits Tony at his home to discuss the Avengers Initiative. However, this version goes a step further. Fury drops a cryptic line:

"You think you're the only one with powers? You're just one part of a much bigger world, Stark. We’re not just talking about super soldiers or gods. You’ve just entered a world where people are born with their power—and trust me, you’ll want to be ready for them."

This tease sets up not only the Avengers but the eventual introduction of mutants into your MCU.

Key Improvements and Themes:

1. Tony and Obadiah’s Relationship: The conflict between Tony and Obadiah is more than just a battle over control of Stark Industries; it’s a battle of ideology. Tony has grown morally, recognizing the damage his weapons have caused, while Obadiah doubles down on his belief that power and control are necessary for global security.
2. The Ten Rings and the Mandarin: The Ten Rings are given more weight, hinting at the future reveal of the Mandarin as Tony’s true nemesis. This sets up Tony’s future struggles as he realizes his technology is being used by increasingly dangerous foes.
3. Deeper Exploration of Tony’s Transformation: Tony’s journey from selfish playboy to responsible hero is more nuanced. The film emphasizes the burden of responsibility that comes with power and technological advancement.
4. Mutants Tease: The post-credits scene hints at mutants, creating excitement for the future of your MCU and integrating the idea that Tony’s world is only the beginning of something much larger.

This version of Iron Man keeps the core of what made the original great while expanding the emotional stakes, deepening the villain’s motivations, and laying the groundwork for future MCU developments, including the Mandarin and mutants.

The Incredible Hulk Revised:

Title: The Incredible Hulk: Rage and Retribution
Main Villain: Emil Blonsky (Abomination)
Secondary Villain: General Thunderbolt Ross
Post-Credits Scene: Hints at mutants with a reference to the Westchester Incident

Plot Outline

The film begins with a fast-paced, intense 20-minute origin sequence that condenses Bruce Banner's fateful experiment, his transformation into the Hulk, and the resulting destruction at the lab. This opening showcases Bruce’s desperate attempts to control the uncontrollable monster he’s become, ultimately leading to his decision to flee and live in hiding.

Act 1: The Rampage and Pursuit

After the opening, the film immediately throws the audience into action. Bruce Banner, struggling to maintain control, transforms into the Hulk during an anxiety attack in New York City. The Hulk rampages through the streets, causing widespread damage. In the chaos, a building collapses, killing several innocent people, including the wife and young son of Emil Blonsky, a highly decorated and retired soldier.

Bruce wakes up in the aftermath, horrified at what the Hulk has done. News of the rampage spreads rapidly, and the U.S. Army, led by General Thunderbolt Ross, is sent to track down and capture the Hulk. Ross sees this as his chance to reclaim control over the super-soldier project that created the Hulk.

Blonsky, now shattered by the loss of his family, reaches out to General Ross, demanding to be involved in the hunt for the Hulk. Ross agrees, and Blonsky re-enlists, driven purely by vengeance.

Act 2: The Monster Within

Bruce is now on the run from both the Army and Blonsky, living a nomadic life as he tries to avoid stress or confrontation that could trigger another transformation. During this time, Bruce is haunted by brief flashbacks to the Hulk's destruction, but his trauma is not fully explored in this film, leaving room for a future sequel to delve deeper into his inner conflict. His primary goal is to find a cure, but his efforts are constantly interrupted by the pursuit of Ross’s forces.

Meanwhile, Blonsky realizes that even with his military training, he cannot match the Hulk's strength. Driven by his thirst for revenge, he secretly agrees to undergo an experimental version of the super-soldier serum, which is touted as a perfected variant of the process that created the Hulk. However, this serum has unexpected consequences, and Blonsky begins to mutate, becoming faster, stronger, and more dangerous, but at the cost of his humanity.

Blonsky’s transformation into the Abomination is gradual but horrifying, as his mind begins to unravel. Unlike Bruce, Blonsky is not tormented by his monstrous side—he embraces it, viewing it as a tool to exact his revenge on the Hulk. Unlike Bruce’s Hulk, Blonsky maintains a level of control over the Abomination, making him an even more formidable opponent.

Act 3: Abomination’s Rise

As Bruce continues to evade capture, he is eventually cornered in a small town by both the Army and Blonsky, now fully transformed into the Abomination. In a terrifying display of power, Blonsky attacks the town, causing widespread destruction and proving himself to be a greater menace than the Hulk. The Hulk emerges in response to the threat, and the two monsters engage in a brutal, destructive fight.

The climactic battle between the Hulk and the Abomination is more than just a contest of strength—it’s a battle of control. While the Hulk is a force of raw, unchecked rage, the Abomination fights with brutal precision, exploiting his superior combat skills and control. The fight destroys much of the town, and Bruce struggles to maintain any semblance of control over the Hulk during the chaos.

In the end, the Hulk barely manages to defeat the Abomination, but Bruce knows he’s still a danger to the world. With the Army closing in, Bruce flees again, realizing that as long as he is the Hulk, he will always be hunted.

Resolution: Bruce’s Isolation

After the battle, General Ross reflects on the devastation caused by both the Hulk and the Abomination. Though Ross was determined to bring Banner in, the chaos leaves him questioning his own methods. He orders a cover-up of the Abomination's existence, while the media blames the destruction solely on the Hulk, painting Bruce as a public enemy.

Bruce, now more alone than ever, retreats into isolation, moving from place to place in search of a way to control the Hulk, knowing that as long as the monster exists within him, there will always be those who seek to exploit or destroy him.

Post-Credits Scene: The Westchester Incident

In the post-credits scene, Bruce is in a remote part of India, attempting to meditate and control his emotions. A small television in the background is playing a news report. The reporter discusses a mysterious "Incident in Westchester," involving strange, unexplainable occurrences. The term "mutants" is not directly mentioned, but the scene hints at the existence of beings with extraordinary powers.

Bruce’s concentration breaks as the word “incident” triggers flashbacks of his own rampages, particularly the Harlem Incident and the destruction caused during his fight with Abomination. His stress levels rise, and as his eyes begin to glow green, the scene cuts to black, leaving the audience wondering if the Hulk will emerge once again.

Key Improvements and Themes:

1. Blonsky’s Personal Revenge: The loss of his family adds emotional depth to Blonsky's transformation into the Abomination, making him a tragic but terrifying villain. His descent into madness is driven by both grief and a desire for revenge, contrasting with Bruce’s struggle to control the Hulk.
2. Faster, More Focused Origin: By condensing Bruce’s origin story into a quick, powerful opening sequence, the film quickly establishes his connection to the Hulk, allowing the rest of the movie to focus on the consequences of his actions and the pursuit by Ross and Blonsky.
3. Abomination’s Control vs. Hulk’s Chaos: Blonsky’s control over his monstrous form contrasts with Bruce’s lack of control, adding a thematic layer to their conflict. The film explores the idea that while both are monsters, one is driven by revenge and the other by guilt.
4. Post-Credit Tease of Mutants: The mention of the Westchester Incident introduces the idea of mutants into the MCU, subtly linking the Hulk’s story to the wider world of powered individuals. This tease will excite fans familiar with the X-Men lore, without directly mentioning mutants.

This version of The Incredible Hulk retains the core elements of the original film but enhances the emotional and thematic stakes, building a stronger narrative foundation for future films while subtly introducing the broader MCU elements like mutants.

Conclusion:

Now these are just kind of rough draft Ideas for revisions to these two movies. Now In my opinion these two movies alone are actually pretty damn good however they can definitely be improved upon.

My version of the MCU which I have dubbed the "The Ultimate MCU" is quite a complex beast so it'll take awhile to get through everything.

For instance my version of the MCU has 4 Sagas which equals out to a total of 10 Phases.

Now if your wondering what my Phase 1 movies are:

• Iron Man
• The Incredible Hulk
• X-Men
• Fantastic Four
• The Amazing Spider-Man
• Captain America
• Thor
• Ant-Man and the Wasp
• Wolverine
• The Avengers

This is in my opinion the best Phase 1 you could make that is an answer to the question of "What would the MCU look like if Marvel had all of it's character rights from the beginning?"

Now I do want your thoughts, what your Iron Man and Incredible Hulk revisions would look like, what your Phase 1 would look, etc…

Links to my Sagas: Infinity Saga: https://www.reddit.com/r/fixingmovies/comments/1flpqxz/ultimate_mcu_infinity_saga/

Multiverse Saga: https://www.reddit.com/r/fixingmovies/comments/1flrv6n/the_ultimate_mcu_multiverse_saga/

Mutant Saga: https://www.reddit.com/r/fixingmovies/comments/1fltpt6/the_ultimate_mcu_mutant_saga/

Doomsday Saga: https://www.reddit.com/r/fixingmovies/comments/1fm0lja/the_ultimate_mcu_final_saga_and_phase_doomsday/